Stuck in a basement
of meaningless girls
We pick flowers
Grown in chemicals
That scream from cups
Beneath fluorescent lights
I bit into her tongue
As we squeezed each other’s skulls
I wanted to crush her
Make her eyes pop
Red lights
White hospital gowns
There were no other Yokos
In the bar that night
String lights hang
Like a barn in the south
Where the moon changes faces in the crowd
He screamed in my face,
With his cowboy hat on
When I said, “Bass!”
To rhyme with his questions
They locked me up
And threw me down
To sleep in the cots
Next to the other flowers
This is the place for meaningless girls

Interesting stuff, very graphic, and an enjoyable read, Keep it up
Thanks! I haven’t posted in a while…new ones are coming soon.
vivid and enjoyable!
Thank you. I appreciate that!
cool poem!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/sunday-special-2/
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Thanks SO much!
Excellent work. Nice control. Well done.
Right on! Loved reading your work. Any artist who refers to Yoko is alright in my book!
Thanks so much
The last lines are very good. I got that kinda cramp thing in my chest…..could have been the cocaine….Just kidding. the flowers are heartbreaking. Cheers.
Ha, thank you! I appreciate that. Glad I gave you that feeling, it was certainly my intent.